A potentially great piece.
It started off great. Had a really nice genuine sound, and you were using your symphony really nicely. However, then you brought in the choirs I felt it ruined the entire thing. =(
It was apparent what you were going for but it just didn't come together as it needed to. The choirs staccato's were too random and repetitive. They had no real power to them, and for what you intended them for they took away instead of added.
130+ Was fine until 3mins hit and you bring them back in. Then it went sour again. You said that symphonic choirs is too power hungry. Well, it's a 40gig program. It wont run perfectly on anything that is a lesser machine. And it's not like magnus, or philharmonik where you can pick it up and go. You can get EWSymphonic Choirs to almost sing anything if used correctly.
You have great potential. Keep it up.
7/10 , 3.5/5 (rounded up) 4/5